Tode saare khwaab maine,
bikheri saari khushiyan.
Maine hi chupaya chand ko,
gira diye saare taare asmaan se.
Mitaya maine hi indradhanush ko,
chura li phoolon ki khusboo.
Khud hi bichaye raaste pe kaantein,
bujha di jeevan se roshini.
Bhare maine hi aankhon mein aansoo,
cheen li labon ki hansi.
Choda maine hi zindagi ka aanchal,
chuta ummeed ka daaman.
Reh gaya mere dil mein dard,
aur meri aankhon mein Siskiyan.
Siege Perilous
5 years ago
Thnx for penning down my THOUGHTS !!
maine hi fer liye doston se mooh apanaa…
choot gaya bahot pehale woh daaman dosti ka !!
kosha
5 years ago
tumhare thoughts
baap re tumhe kya ho gaya hai??
kosha
5 years ago
are…
ab mera koi friend aisa feel kar raha ho toh main nahin poochoongi kya…
kosha
5 years ago
@nirmal
thanx
Nirmal Agarwal
5 years ago
a very nice poem….
gud one really liked it…
Prasoon
5 years ago
twas like my words penned down poetically
the most deep n awesome representation – thats what i felt..
great writing.. with a perfect title
....R.A.J.A....
5 years ago
saare TLTE waale paagal ho gaye hain
kosha
5 years ago
@prasoon
thanx for the compliment…
but y r u so sad??
@raja
kya hua??
Athena
5 years ago
beautiful lines
)) keep penning down such beautiful poems 
waise thnx for removing word verification
)))
Rhapsodising Ass
5 years ago
It was pretty interesting to see that here you have a quote from ” The Fountainhead” but then you orkut profile you just don’t mention it. Just a comment.
kosha
5 years ago
@vini
thanx dear
@moser baer
well didnt feel like putting it on orkut…just like tht…
Saras
5 years ago
beautiful lines
btw yahan mujhe jaisa dikh raha hai us hisab se tume nirmal ko thanx pahle bol diya aur compliment usne baad me diya
??
Pramod
5 years ago
tum bhi kavayitri ban gayi :O … tlte ke ladkiyon to kavitaon ka shauk kab se hua
… vini tumhaara turn nxt 
nice poem … keep @ it
kosha
5 years ago
@saras
..
thanx
pata nahin yaar…ye blogger ka kamaal hai..maine toh baad mein hi thanx bola tha
but ok..it makes me look foreboder
@pommu
he he he..main likhti hamesha se thi…bas post nahin karti thi
aajkal post bhi karne lagi hoon..
Megha
5 years ago
now u gave me shock dear:)))))
well tlte is now becomin source of poets
DDDDd
kosha
5 years ago
@megs
maine aisa kya kar diya
Alchemist
5 years ago
the only hindi poem i understood everything, rather everything but title
wat does siskiyan mean?
Chitrangada
5 years ago
very rude but very touchy …
can see the anger in the wrds :0
but i really wonder y so much of harshness towards life in that ..
Megha
5 years ago
ohho kosha
i want to say this is a nice poem:)))))
coolvir
5 years ago
Hey nice lines
And even amazing templete….Loved your blog
Phoenix
5 years ago
…ab koi mere dil se poochhe..aakhir ye kiya kyon maine!
Beautiful!
Megha
5 years ago
hmmmm…..no new blog kosha
yogesh moorjani
5 years ago
beautifully written… just a bit concerned about what lies behind those lines….