When I look at the moon,
I see you smiling at me;
When I glance around the stars,
I find you winking at me;
When I try to look at the sun,
I feel the intensity of your love for me;
When I walk on the shore,
I see you rushing towards me;
When I hear the birds,
I hear you singing for me;
When a breeze passes by me,
I feel as if you embraced me;
When I hold a flower in my hand,
I see you admiring me in my lap;
When I am standing in the rain,
I feel the slight touch of yours on my face;
When I smell the fresh earth,
I smell your breath in it;
When I see the mirror,
I can see you in my eyes.

Mipple Bora
5 years ago
:* and I just close my eyes to see you
shailesh
5 years ago
hmmm………..
Prasoon
5 years ago
i believe the poem could’ve gone on and on…
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nice composititon n situational [acc to the date tom
....R.A.J.A....
5 years ago
hmmmmm ………. smells like fresh love
Happy Valentine’s Day, btw >:D<
[the verification word is "LUVot"]
kosha
5 years ago
@mipple
:”>
@shailesh
hmmmmm…
@prasoon
yes..it cud have gone on and on…but i had to stop somewhere…
@raja
happy V Day to u too >:D<
Yashu.K
5 years ago
good one
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{i know who tht is for
Voice
5 years ago
inspiration?
good one
chandu
5 years ago
simple and nice
kosha
5 years ago
@yashu, bhav & chandu
thanx
chandu
5 years ago
@Kosha
can u make the text srolling while the background being steady and unchanging?
Alchemist
5 years ago
hey nice poem…will b watching space frm nw
ps:get a shoutbox!
SarvSakthimaan
5 years ago
Kya public kewal bakwaas likhti hai kuch acha likho….deemaag ka band baj gaya hai
SarvSakthimaan
5 years ago
Mere ko lagta hai tumhe aaltu faaltu likhne ka bhut sokh hai…koi baat nahi….keep it up kam se kam koi bekaar kuch tho kar raha hai…..But good poem…
kosha
5 years ago
@chandu
i tried it in the start itlsef…but didnt appear pleasing…so stuck to this type…
@alch
thanx…
well i dont like shoutbox…
@sarvshaktimaan
toh khud likho na kuch
Megha
5 years ago
its simple,sweet,lovely composition
something like just close ur eyes and all this lines comin on ur mind
love this one
))))))
Alchemist
5 years ago
mebbe u gt me wrong….i dint ask u to like it!
Tojo Mathew
5 years ago
Kosha I just came acorss your blog space..
It’s awsome….Keep it up.
I didn’t know your murmurs sound this loud…!
Kudos and Cool Going..!!
kosha
5 years ago
@megs
thanx dear
but still far behind wat u write…
@alch
so i dont keep things tht i dont like
@tojo
hey….thanx for visiting my blog
and yeah thanx for the compliment too
Alchemist
5 years ago
megs blog rele rocks …
@kosha…try n b less selfish. X(
i am nt finding enuf shoutboxes to shout in
kosha
5 years ago
@alch
really…she is too good at writing
y do u want to shout??
Siege Perilous
5 years ago
Its just the Feeling of love tht inspired to write such an emotionally satisfying simple yet powerful lyrics !!
[:)][:)]
I just Love … to be in Love !!
Chitrangada
5 years ago
beautiful n kinda ..ro ..:P
sometimes u really feel ur emotions in wrds ..n thats exactly happend here
nandi23
5 years ago
I like this, the use of the ordinary exemplifies the extraordinary!!!
cleverly written!